【例文】
Time eem to peed up a oon a the tudent tep into their final and vital year．The college entrance examination i approaching day by day．Quite a few tudent have moved out from their dormitorie to live in a rented room near the chool to make every minute count．
It cannot be denied that they have their own time chedule after clae and eaily concentrate on leon alone in their mall room．What’ important，with their morn taking care of them，they can pare more time for tudie．However，there exit ome diadvantage．For example，ometime their mind go wandering eaily without competitor round．Furthermore，a tudent who i left alone to tudy at rather an eay atmophere tend to get ditracted or even feel tired eaily．
In pite of the fact that the dorm life i full of fun and friendhip，noiy ong and hout in the dorm after evening clae only quiet down long after the blackout at 10：30 p. m.，leading to a eriou lack of leep，I think．Wore till，they don’t make fullet ue of time to tudy o，from my perpective．I prefer to live in the rented room．
【译文】
时间仿佛加快只要到他们的最终和重要year.The高考学生的步骤是接近一天day.Quite不少学生已经从宿舍出来，在学校附近的一个出租房住，使每分钟数。
不能否认，他们有自己的时间后，班级的时间表，容易在他们的小room.What'单独集中教训很重要，他们的早晨，对他们的照顾，他们可以腾出更多的时间用于tudie.However，也存在一些缺点。例如，有时他们的头脑去流浪很容易没有竞争对手round.Furthermore，一谁是独自学习的气氛，而一个学生往往容易分心，甚至觉得容易疲倦。WWw.hAOZUowEn.com
鉴于该宿舍生活的乐趣和友谊，充分和嘈杂的音乐班后，晚上才安静下来后不久，在10:30停电山口尽管在宿舍条留言米，导致睡眠严重不足，我think.Wore的是，他们不从我perpective.I充分的时间来研究，以便使用，宁愿住在出租房内。