假定你是李华,正是英国牛津参加短期语言培训,计划星期天去伦敦旅游。互联网上一则广告引起了你的注意,但一些具体信息不明确(箭头所指内容)。请给该旅行社发一封电子邮件,询问有关情况。
注意:
词数100左右,信的格式已为你写好。
2.可根据内容要点适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
3.参考词汇:牛津——Oxford 费用——fee
Dear Sir/Madame,
I’m writing for more information about the day tour to London.
A a tudent at Oxford Univerity, I’d like to know if you have any pecial price for tudent. A for the money you charge, doe it cover the entrance fee for viiting the place lited? What about lunch? I it included? Or do I need to bring along my own food?
How long will the tour lat? Since I need to prepare my leon for the next day, I’d like to know the time to return. Beide, i there any time for hopping? I really want to have a look at the big tore in London.
Your,
Li Hua
[名师点评]
是根据画面的提示来写一封电子邮件。在文章中首先把握了全部的要点,叙述较为完整;其次,运用一些过渡句和衔接词将文章串联,意思连贯。文章中采用了第一人称和一般现在时,这是值得肯定的地方。 2[由Www.haozuowen.com整理]
